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!Issue!!Examples
!Issue!!Examples
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| Vertical ellipses
| Vertical ellipsis
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| [[File:Vertical ellipses.webp|x100px]]
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| Typos (commonly, incorrectly-doubled letters in words like “embarrassed”)
| Typos (commonly, incorrectly-doubled letters in words like “embarrassed”)
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| Inconsistent line spacing
| Inconsistent line spacing
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| [[File:Inconsistent line spacing.webp|x100px]]
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| Line spacing too small or too large
| Line spacing too small or too large
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| Too small: [[File:Small line spacing.webp|x100px]]
 
Too large: [[File:High line spacing.webp|x100px]]
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| Uncentered text
| Text not centre-aligned (this isn’t always bad; just follow the shape of the bubble)
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| [[File:Left align.webp|x100px]]
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| Bad shaping
| Bad shaping
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| [[File:Bad shaping.webp|x100px]]
 
[[File:Bad shaping 2.webp|x100px]]
 
[[File:Bad shaping 3.webp|x100px]]
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| Incorrect crossbar I
| Incorrect crossbar I
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| [[File:Incorrect crossbar I.webp|x100px]]
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| Missing crossbar I (assuming that the font has it)
| Missing crossbar I (assuming that the font has it)
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| [[File:Missing crossbar I.webp|x100px]]
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| Not using different fonts for different JA fonts (incl. thoughts)
| Not using different fonts for different JA fonts (incl. thoughts)
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| [[File:Not enough fonts JA.webp|x100px]] [[File:Not enough fonts EN.webp|x100px]]
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| Next-line ellipses or exclamation mark
| Next-line punctuation, e.g. ellipsis, exclamation mark or question mark
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| [[File:Next line punctuation.webp]]
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| Hyphen at the start of the line
| Hyphen at the start of the line
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| [[File:Next-line hyphen.webp|x100px]]
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| Wrong hyphenation points
| Wrong hyphenation points
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| [[File:Incorrect hyphenation point.webp|x100px]]
 
“Person” is hyphenated as “per•son”
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| Four-dot ellipses
| Two-dot, four-dot, etc ellipsis; ellipses should be in multiples of three
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| [[File:Four-dot ellipses.webp|x100px]]
 
[[File:Two-dot ellipsis.webp|x100px]]
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| Missing punctuation at end of sentence
| Missing punctuation at end of sentence
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| [[File:Missing punctuation.webp|x100px]]
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| Non-comic font used or “chopsticks” font used (e.g. Manga Temple)
| Non-comic font used or “chopsticks” font used (e.g. Manga Temple)
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| [[File:Non-comic font.webp|x100px]] [[File:Manga temple.webp|x100px]]
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| Cliché font used (e.g. Comic Sans, Wild Words)
| Cliché font used (e.g. Comic Sans, Wild Words)
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| [[File:Comic sans.webp|x100px]] [[File:Wildwords.webp|x100px]]
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| Using different fonts for different characters
| Using different fonts for different characters
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| Text not centre-aligned (this isn’t always bad; just follow the shape of the bubble)
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| Stray space
| Stray space
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| [[File:Stray space.webp|x100px]]
 
A stray space before “reminiscing”
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| No space after ellipses or space before ellipses
| Wrong spacing around punctuation, often ellipses
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| [[File:No space after ellipses.webp|x100px]]
 
[[File:Space before ellipsis.webp|x100px]]
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| Capitalization at the start of bubbles, when it continues a sentence
| Capitalization at the start of bubbles, when it continues a sentence
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| [[File:Incorrect capitalization.webp|x100px]]
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| No capitalization at the start of bubbles, when it doesn’t continue a sentence
| No capitalization at the start of a sentence
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| [[File:Missing capital.webp|x100px]]
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| Not enough white border around SFX
| Not enough white border around SFX
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| Font aspect ratio is messed with
| Font aspect ratio is messed with
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| [[File:Squish text.webp|x100px]]
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| Bad perspective transform
| Bad perspective transform
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| [[File:Bad perspective transform.webp|x100px]]
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| Text too close to edge of bubble
| Text too close to edge of bubble
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| [[File:Big text.webp|x100px]]
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| Text is off-black
| Text is off-black (or off-white)
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| Inconsist capitalization and punctuation of side text
| Inconsistent capitalization and punctuation of side text
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| “Penrose stairs” layering
| “Penrose stairs” layering: when text is above one part of the art but below another in an inconsistent way
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| [[File:Penrose stairs layering.png|x100px]]
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| Mismatched repetion
| Mismatched repetition
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| Mismatched flashback text
| Mismatched flashback text
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| [[File:Mismatch flashback original.webp|x150px]]
 
[[File:Mismatch flashback.webp|x150px]]
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| Abrupt cutoff that uses an ellipsis (instead of a dash)
| [[File:Cutoff ellipsis.webp|x100px]]
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| Abrupt cutoffs use dashes, not ellipses
| Text split over multiple bubbles
| [[File:Weird bubble shape.webp|x100px]]
 
[[File:CURSED.webp|x100px]]
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| Untranslated SFX: “Doki”, “Go”, etc
| Untranslated SFX: “Doki”, “Go”, etc
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| [[File:Doki doki.webp|x100px]]
 
“Doki doki” can be translated as “th-thump”, “ba-dump”, “bdmp”, etc
 
[[File:Goongoongoon.webp|x100px]]
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| Nonsensical SFX
| Nonsensical SFX
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| [[File:Nonsensical SFX.webp|x150px]]
 
The SFX is a speech bubble from the chair, so it should be a noise the chair makes, like “creak”.
 
[[File:Nonsensical SFX 2.webp|x100px]]
 
Did she really extend her hand and crack it?
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| Bad/unnatural wording
| Bad/unnatural wording
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| Incorrectly added hyphenated phrase
| Incorrectly added hyphenated phrase
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| “The most-popular flavour is”
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| Incorrectly not added hyphenated phrase (e.g. “first year” “first-year”)
| Incorrectly not added hyphenated phrase
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| “first year” should be “first-year”
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| Apostophes and “s”s: “Girl’s school”, “Parent’s evening”
| Apostophes and “s”s
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| “Girl’s school” should be “Girls’ school”, “Parent’s evening” should be “Parents’ evening”
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| Missing comma: “It’s not like I’m mad at you Akizuki-san.”
| Missing comma
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| “It’s not like I’m mad at you Akizuki-san.”, “Oh no not with that girl…”
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| Extra comma: “I think, […]”
| Extra comma
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| “I think, it’s a good idea”
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| Contraction not used in speech, e.g. “you are”
| Contraction not used in speech
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| “You are” → “you’re”, “I am” → “I’m”
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| Phrase that is close to, but not exactly, an English idiom
| Phrase that is close to, but not exactly, an English idiom
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* “You’ve been following me all the afternoon!” → “You’ve been following me all afternoon!”
* “I guess it can’t be this bad to” → “I guess it can’t be that bad to”
* “I bought it on my own accord” → “I bought it of my own accord”
* “What’s gotten in her?” → “What’s gotten into her?”
* “Did I just get caught up into this?” → “Did I just get caught up in this?”
* “I had a few tricks up my sleeves” → “I had a few tricks up my sleeve”
* “Her reputation spread wide and far” → “Her reputation spread far and wide”
* “What’s up all of the sudden?” → “What’s up all of a sudden?”
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| Inconsistent spelling dialect
| Inconsistent spelling dialect
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| “ize” versus “ise” endings; “Mum” versus “Mom”; “color” versus “colour”; etc
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| Inconsistently-spaced words, e.g. “photoshoot” vs “photo shoot”
| Inconsistently-spaced compound phrases (in the case where both are grammatically correct)
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| “photoshoot” versus “photo shoot”
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| Missing space in words that are sometimes compound: “She walked onstage”, “Good to have you onboard”
| Missing space in words that are sometimes compound
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* [[File:Walked onstage.webp|x100px]]
* “Good to have you onboard”
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| Wrong extended letter (e.g. “grabbbbeeeeed” instead of “graaaaabbed”)
| Wrong extended letter
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| “grabbbbeeeeed” “graaaaabbed”, “pleaaaase” → “pleeeease”, “Stop ittttt!” → “Stop iiiiiit!”
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| En dashes should be used to hyphenate phrases that have spaces: “red bean paste–filled bun”, “Cold War–era”
| En dashes should be used to hyphenate phrases that have spaces
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| Correct examples include “red bean paste–filled bun”, “Cold War–era”
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| Capitalization of words that are both normal and proper nouns: “to Dad” but “to my dad”.
| Capitalization of words that are both normal and proper nouns:  
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| “to my Dad” “to my dad”, “to dad” → “to Dad”
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| Inconsistent tense
| Inconsistent tense
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| Inconsistent 3rd person vs 2nd person
| Inconsistent 3rd person vs 2nd person
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| [[File:Inconsistent person.webp|x200px]]
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| Stock phrases: “that person”, “pinch”, “even if you tell me that”, “say unnecessary things”, “killing intent”; see also this [https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vTHDoAcD9D4pMo8idCwbwTOky6I8EeLfazDPEROL3FIsyZx958u7MxhUZ0wLSXUWw/pubhtml spreadsheet of stock phrases]
| Stock phrases
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| “that person”, “pinch”, “even if you tell me that”, “say unnecessary things”, “killing intent”; see also this [https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vTHDoAcD9D4pMo8idCwbwTOky6I8EeLfazDPEROL3FIsyZx958u7MxhUZ0wLSXUWw/pubhtml spreadsheet of stock phrases]
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| Overuse of Japanese sounds like “Kya” or “Eehh”
| Overuse of Japanese sounds
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| “Kya”, “Eehh”
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| Overuse of Japanese punctuation like tildes or “…!”
| Overuse of Japanese punctuation like tildes and ellipses-exclamation marks
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| “Oh no~”, “No way…!”
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| Overuse of ◯◯ or XX or similar, instead of rewording
| Overuse of ◯◯ or XX or similar, instead of rewording
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| “You wanted to go to ◯◯ High School, didn’t you?” → “You wanted to go to that high school, didn’t you?”
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| Inline TL notes; prefer folding them into the text, or adding notes at the end
| Inline TL notes; prefer folding them into the text, or adding notes at the end
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| Lines connected incorrectly
| Lines connected incorrectly
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| [[File:Incorrect lines JA.webp|x100px]] [[File:Incorrect lines clean.webp|x100px]]
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| Screentone wrong shade
| Screentone wrong shade
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| [[File:Screentone wrong shade.webp|x100px]]
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| Screentone misaligned
| Screentone misaligned
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| [[File:Misaligned screentone.webp|x100px]]
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| Screentone too blurry or sharp
| Screentone too blurry or sharp
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| [[File:Screentone too sharp.webp|x100px]]
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| Missed cleaning speck
| Missed cleaning speck
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| [[File:Speck.webp|x100px]]
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| Lines connected that were intentionally split in the raw
| Lines connected that were intentionally split in the raw

Revision as of 22:48, 4 December 2024

Quality control, often abbreviated to QC, is the process of reading through a fully-typeset manga (ideally, alongside the raws) to point out mistakes and areas of improvement. It is also known as proofreading (PR), but this term may also refer to reading over the script prior to cleaning and typesetting.

Quality control should a collaborative process between the typesetter and QCer; there are often many rounds of back-and-forth before the best approach is decided upon.

This page collects a number of common issues that QCers will raise, and where appropriate gives examples.

Typesetting issues

Issue Examples
Vertical ellipsis
Typos (commonly, incorrectly-doubled letters in words like “embarrassed”)
Inconsistent line spacing
Line spacing too small or too large Too small:

Too large:

Text not centre-aligned (this isn’t always bad; just follow the shape of the bubble)
Bad shaping

Incorrect crossbar I
Missing crossbar I (assuming that the font has it)
Not using different fonts for different JA fonts (incl. thoughts)
Next-line punctuation, e.g. ellipsis, exclamation mark or question mark
Hyphen at the start of the line
Wrong hyphenation points

“Person” is hyphenated as “per•son”

Two-dot, four-dot, etc ellipsis; ellipses should be in multiples of three

Missing punctuation at end of sentence
Non-comic font used or “chopsticks” font used (e.g. Manga Temple)
Cliché font used (e.g. Comic Sans, Wild Words)
Using different fonts for different characters
Stray space

A stray space before “reminiscing”

Wrong spacing around punctuation, often ellipses

Capitalization at the start of bubbles, when it continues a sentence
No capitalization at the start of a sentence
Not enough white border around SFX
Font aspect ratio is messed with
Bad perspective transform
Text too close to edge of bubble
Text is off-black (or off-white)
Bubbles too thin (should have redrawn bubble)
Text rotated 90°
Empty bubble
Missing SFX
Inconsistent capitalization and punctuation of side text
Obscured text missing a half-covered letter
“Penrose stairs” layering: when text is above one part of the art but below another in an inconsistent way
Mismatched repetition
Mismatched flashback text

Abrupt cutoff that uses an ellipsis (instead of a dash)
Text split over multiple bubbles


Translation issues

Issue Examples
Untranslated SFX: “Doki”, “Go”, etc

“Doki doki” can be translated as “th-thump”, “ba-dump”, “bdmp”, etc

Nonsensical SFX

The SFX is a speech bubble from the chair, so it should be a noise the chair makes, like “creak”.

Did she really extend her hand and crack it?

Bad/unnatural wording
Incorrectly added hyphenated phrase “The most-popular flavour is”
Incorrectly not added hyphenated phrase “first year” should be “first-year”
Apostophes and “s”s “Girl’s school” should be “Girls’ school”, “Parent’s evening” should be “Parents’ evening”
Missing comma “It’s not like I’m mad at you Akizuki-san.”, “Oh no not with that girl…”
Extra comma “I think, it’s a good idea”
Contraction not used in speech “You are” → “you’re”, “I am” → “I’m”
Phrase that is close to, but not exactly, an English idiom
  • “You’ve been following me all the afternoon!” → “You’ve been following me all afternoon!”
  • “I guess it can’t be this bad to” → “I guess it can’t be that bad to”
  • “I bought it on my own accord” → “I bought it of my own accord”
  • “What’s gotten in her?” → “What’s gotten into her?”
  • “Did I just get caught up into this?” → “Did I just get caught up in this?”
  • “I had a few tricks up my sleeves” → “I had a few tricks up my sleeve”
  • “Her reputation spread wide and far” → “Her reputation spread far and wide”
  • “What’s up all of the sudden?” → “What’s up all of a sudden?”
Inconsistent spelling dialect “ize” versus “ise” endings; “Mum” versus “Mom”; “color” versus “colour”; etc
Inconsistently-spaced compound phrases (in the case where both are grammatically correct) “photoshoot” versus “photo shoot”
Missing space in words that are sometimes compound
  • “Good to have you onboard”
Wrong extended letter “grabbbbeeeeed” → “graaaaabbed”, “pleaaaase” → “pleeeease”, “Stop ittttt!” → “Stop iiiiiit!”
En dashes should be used to hyphenate phrases that have spaces Correct examples include “red bean paste–filled bun”, “Cold War–era”
Capitalization of words that are both normal and proper nouns: “to my Dad” → “to my dad”, “to dad” → “to Dad”
Inconsistent tense
Inconsistent 3rd person vs 2nd person
Stock phrases “that person”, “pinch”, “even if you tell me that”, “say unnecessary things”, “killing intent”; see also this spreadsheet of stock phrases
Overuse of Japanese sounds “Kya”, “Eehh”
Overuse of Japanese punctuation like tildes and ellipses-exclamation marks “Oh no~”, “No way…!”
Overuse of ◯◯ or XX or similar, instead of rewording “You wanted to go to ◯◯ High School, didn’t you?” → “You wanted to go to that high school, didn’t you?”
Inline TL notes; prefer folding them into the text, or adding notes at the end
Questions (including rhetorical) without question marks

Redrawing issues

Issue Examples
Lines connected incorrectly
Screentone wrong shade
Screentone misaligned
Screentone too blurry or sharp
Missed cleaning speck
Lines connected that were intentionally split in the raw
Missing redraw
Lines too blurry or sharp
No levelling: Black is off-black, white is off-white