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===== A Kiss for the Petals - Lily Platinum ===== その花びらにくちづけを リリ・プラチナム Yuri game from Fuguriya. //Lily Platinum// is the 10th game in //A Kiss for the Petals// series, and the second Ellis x Shizuku story. Read Unkind's review for this couple's first story, //[[http://dniknu.wordpress.com/2011/09/08/first-review-sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-o-tenshi-no-hanabira-zome/|Petal-Colored Angel]]// (SonoHana 8). See [[http://listlessink.wordpress.com/sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-wo-series/|Listless Ink blog]] for an overview of the entire franchise. See [[http://petalsgarden.axypb.net|Petals' Garden]] for English patches of previous SonoHana games. **Translated scripts in bold.** **[[lily_platinum:s001]]** ((Translated by Anonymous)) **[[lily_platinum:s002]]** **[[lily_platinum:s003]]** **[[lily_platinum:s004]]** ((Translated by DeltaCake)) **[[lily_platinum:s005]]** **[[lily_platinum:s006]]** **[[lily_platinum:s007]]** **[[lily_platinum:s008]]** **[[lily_platinum:s009]]** **[[lily_platinum:s010]]** **[[lily_platinum:s011]]** **[[lily_platinum:s012]]** **[[lily_platinum:s013]]** **[[lily_platinum:s014]]** **[[lily_platinum:s015]]** **[[lily_platinum:s016]]** **[[lily_platinum:s017]]** **[[lily_platinum:s018]]** ((Translated by DeltaCake)) The following have been TLC'd and edited by @fkeroge: [[lily_platinum:s001]] , [[lily_platinum:s002]] , [[lily_platinum:s003]] , [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]] The following have been TLC'd and edited by DeltaCake: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s005]],[[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]] | TLC only: [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]], [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]] The following have been TLC'd and edited by hinata: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s002]], [[lily_platinum:s003]], [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]], [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]], [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]], [[lily_platinum:s013]], [[lily_platinum:s014]], [[lily_platinum:s015]], [[lily_platinum:s016]], [[lily_platinum:s017]], [[lily_platinum:s018]] The following have been QC'd and edited by Massaca: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s002]], [[lily_platinum:s003]], [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]], [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]] | Edited only: [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]], [[lily_platinum:s013]], [[lily_platinum:s014]], [[lily_platinum:s015]], [[lily_platinum:s016]], [[lily_platinum:s017]], [[lily_platinum:s018]] Place the translation on the same line with original Japanese, right after the = (no space). Project discussion: [[http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/608.html|here]] In the event that the wiki goes offline, AXYPB hosts his local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/WiI4YbLzYl/10 === Style Guide === Revised style guide: * Character name: Kirishima Shizuku (霧島雫) and Shitogi Eris (粢エリス). * The full name of the school is "St. Michael's School For Girls". The short name is "St. Michael's". * Use American English. * Avoid stock translations: "It can't be helped", "As expected of...", etc. * Spellings: "okay", "all right", "?!" * Stuttering is recorded with repetitions of the first sound and follows capitalization of the stuttered word. * Six dots maximum in groups of three, except in long transitions. * Use past tense to describe actions and present tense to state facts, thoughts, or feelings. * Use second person narration as little as possible. * ― for interruption or truncation. * ~ or extra letters for extension. * Spaces follow ellipses ... unless they are followed by punctuation. * Ignore all of the above for vocalizations. * The ★ represent heart symbols in the text. In game, a graphic is used to display them, so ArcTool uses the ★ as a marker to insert that graphic in the translation. === Comments === Lines that do not include an offset will be ignored by ArcTool. You can leave comments in the scripts to ask for clarification. Precede comments with a # to make them stand out. |
List of all oneshots (Recent Oneshots)
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