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===== A Kiss for the Petals - Lily Platinum =====
その花びらにくちづけを リリ・プラチナム

Yuri game from Fuguriya. //Lily Platinum// is the 10th game in //A Kiss for the Petals// series, and the second Ellis x Shizuku story. Read Unkind's review for this couple's first story, //[[http://dniknu.wordpress.com/2011/09/08/first-review-sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-o-tenshi-no-hanabira-zome/|Petal-Colored Angel]]// (SonoHana 8). See [[http://listlessink.wordpress.com/sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-wo-series/|Listless Ink blog]] for an overview of the entire franchise. See [[http://petalsgarden.axypb.net|Petals' Garden]] for English patches of previous SonoHana games.

**Translated scripts in bold.**

**[[lily_platinum:s001]]**  ((Translated by Anonymous)) 
**[[lily_platinum:s002]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s003]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s004]]**  ((Translated by DeltaCake))
**[[lily_platinum:s005]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s006]]**  
**[[lily_platinum:s007]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s008]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s009]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s010]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s011]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s012]]**  
**[[lily_platinum:s013]]** 
**[[lily_platinum:s014]]**     
**[[lily_platinum:s015]]** 
**[[lily_platinum:s016]]** 
**[[lily_platinum:s017]]**
**[[lily_platinum:s018]]** ((Translated by DeltaCake))

The following have been TLC'd and edited by @fkeroge: [[lily_platinum:s001]] , [[lily_platinum:s002]] , [[lily_platinum:s003]] , [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]]

The following have been TLC'd and edited by DeltaCake: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s005]],[[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]] | TLC only: [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]], [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]]

The following have been TLC'd and edited by hinata: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s002]], [[lily_platinum:s003]], [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]], [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]], [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]], [[lily_platinum:s013]], [[lily_platinum:s014]], [[lily_platinum:s015]], [[lily_platinum:s016]], [[lily_platinum:s017]], [[lily_platinum:s018]]

The following have been QC'd and edited by Massaca: [[lily_platinum:s001]], [[lily_platinum:s002]], [[lily_platinum:s003]], [[lily_platinum:s004]], [[lily_platinum:s005]], [[lily_platinum:s006]], [[lily_platinum:s007]], [[lily_platinum:s008]], [[lily_platinum:s009]], [[lily_platinum:s010]] | Edited only: [[lily_platinum:s011]], [[lily_platinum:s012]], [[lily_platinum:s013]], [[lily_platinum:s014]], [[lily_platinum:s015]], [[lily_platinum:s016]], [[lily_platinum:s017]], [[lily_platinum:s018]]

Place the translation on the same line with original Japanese, right after the = (no space).

Project discussion: [[http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/608.html|here]]

In the event that the wiki goes offline, AXYPB hosts his local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/WiI4YbLzYl/10

=== Style Guide ===

Revised style guide:
  * Character name: Kirishima Shizuku (霧島雫) and Shitogi Eris (粢エリス).
  * The full name of the school is "St. Michael's School For Girls". The short name is "St. Michael's". 
  * Use American English.
  * Avoid stock translations: "It can't be helped", "As expected of...", etc.
  * Spellings: "okay", "all right", "?!"
  * Stuttering is recorded with repetitions of the first sound and follows capitalization of the stuttered word.
  * Six dots maximum in groups of three, except in long transitions.
  * Use past tense to describe actions and present tense to state facts, thoughts, or feelings.
  * Use second person narration as little as possible.
  * ― for interruption or truncation.
  * ~ or extra letters for extension.
  * Spaces follow ellipses ... unless they are followed by punctuation.
  * Ignore all of the above for vocalizations.
  * The ★ represent heart symbols in the text. In game, a graphic is used to display them, so ArcTool uses the ★ as a marker to insert that graphic in the translation.

=== Comments ===
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