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===== A Kiss for the Petals - Sweet Grown-up Kisses ===== その花びらにくちづけを あまくておとなのとろけるちゅう Yuri game from Fuguriya. //Amakute Otona no Torokeru Chuu// is the 9th game in //A Kiss for the Petals// series, and the second Takako x Runa story. The previous game in this arc, //Amakute Hoshikute Torokeru Chuu//, has been translated as //Sweet Enchanting Kisses// [[http://axypbworld.wordpress.com/2011/11/22/sh7/|here]]. See [[http://listlessink.wordpress.com/sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-wo-series/|Listless Ink blog]] for an overview of the entire franchise. See [[http://petalsgarden.axypb.net|Petals' Garden]] for English patches of previous SonoHana games. **Note:** Due to a glitch in the original script file in s008, this modified file must be used instead for translation: http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9_FIX.zip **Translated script in bold** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s001]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s002]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s003]]** ((Translated by akbjker)) **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s004]]** ((Translated by Joe0Bloggs with reference to Chinese translation by jackcdx)) **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s005]]** ((Translated by Joe0Bloggs and akbjker)) **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s006]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s007]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s008]]** ((Translated by akbjker)) **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s009]]** ((Translated by Darkholme)) **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s010]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s011]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s012]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s013]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s014]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s015]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s016]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s017]]** **[[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s018]]** ((Translated by akbjker)) The following chapters have been TLC'd and edited by Lucas Magnus (formerly @fkeroge): [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s001]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s002]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s003]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s004]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s005]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s006]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s007]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s008]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s009]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s010]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s011]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s012]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s013]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s014]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s015]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s016]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s017]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s018]] The following chapters have been QC by AXYPB: [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s001]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s002]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s002]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s003]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s004]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s005]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s006]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s007]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s008]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s009]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s010]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s011]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s012]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s013]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s014]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s015]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s016]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s017]] [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s018]] The following chapters have been TLC'd and edited by hinata: [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s001]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s002]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s003]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s004]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s005]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s006]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s007]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s008]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s009]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s010]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s011]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s012]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s013]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s014]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s015]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s016]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s017]], [[amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s018]] Place the translation on the same line with original Japanese, right after the = (no space). Project discussion: [[http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/638.html|here]] In the event that the wiki goes offline, AXYPB hosts his local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/ACh2agDIBS/9 === Style Guide === Revised style guide: * The full name of the school is "St. Michael's Academy For Girls". The short name is "St. Michael's". * Runa refers to Takako as "Sensei" rather than her given name. * Runa refers to her older sister as "Nee-sama". * Use American English. * Avoid stock translations: "It can't be helped", "As expected of...", etc. * Spellings: "okay", "all right", "?!" * Stuttering is recorded with repetitions of the first sound and follows capitalization of the stuttered word. * Six dots maximum in groups of three, except in long transitions. * Use past tense to describe actions and present tense to state facts, thoughts, or feelings. * Use second person narration as little as possible. * ― for interruption or truncation. * ~ or extra letters for extension. * Spaces follow ellipses ... unless they are followed by punctuation. * Ignore all of the above for vocalizations. * The ★ represent heart symbols in the text. In game, a graphic is used to display them, so ArcTool uses the ★ as a marker to insert that graphic in the translation. === Comments === Lines that do not include an offset will be ignored by ArcTool. You can leave comments in the scripts to ask for clarification. Precede comments with a # to make them stand out. |
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