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===== A Kiss for the Petals - Whisper With A Kiss ===== その花びらにくちづけを 唇とキスで呟いて Yuri game from Fuguriya. //Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite// (literally //Whisper With Lips And Kisses//) is the 6th game in //A Kiss for the Petals// series, and the second Nanami x Yuuna story. See also //[[http://listlessink.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/kuchibiru-to-kiss-de-tsubuyaite/|Listless Ink's review]]//. See [[http://listlessink.wordpress.com/sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-wo-series/|Listless Ink blog]] for an overview of the entire franchise. See [[http://petalsgarden.axypb.net|Petals' Garden]] for English patches of previous SonoHana games. **Translated script in bold.** **[[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] ((Translated by Kuchibiru and @fkeroge)) [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] ((Translated Japanese->Chinese(jackcdz)->English(Joe0Bloggs) )) [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] ((Translated by Kuchibiru and @fkeroge)) [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s007]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s008]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s009]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s010]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s011]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s012]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s013]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s014]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s015]]**((Translated Japanese->Chinese(jackcdz)->English(Joe0Bloggs) )) The following have been TLC'd by Deltacake: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s007]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s008]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s009]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s010]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s011]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s012]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s013]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s014]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s015]] The following have been TLC'd by @fkeroge: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s009]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s010]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s011]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s012]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s013]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s014]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s015]] The following have been Edited by Virus123: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] The following have been QCed by AXYPB: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s007]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s008]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s009]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s010]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s011]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s012]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s013]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s014]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s015]] The following have been QCed by Commentator: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] The following have been edited by @fkeroge: [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s001]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s002]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s003]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s004]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s005]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s006]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s007]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s008]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s009]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s010]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s011]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s012]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s013]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s014]] [[kuchibiru_to_kiss_de_tsubuyaite:s015]] Place the translation on the same line with original Japanese, right after the = (no space). Project discussion: [[http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/657.html|here]] **Version 1 released 17 December 2012:** [[http://petalsgarden.axypb.net/2012/12/17/sh6/]] In the event that the wiki goes offline, AXYPB hosts his local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/cGIL8JH-Lm/6 === Style Guide === Revised style guide: * Character name: Oda Nanami (織田七海) and Matsubara Yuuna(松原優菜). * The full name of the school is "St. Michael's School For Girls". The short name is "St. Michael's". * Use American English. * Avoid stock translations: "It can't be helped", "As expected of...", etc. * Spellings: "okay", "all right", "?!" * Translate マリア様 to "Virgin Mary" in description and "Mother Mary" when she is being addressed by a character. * Stuttering is recorded with repetitions of the first sound and follows capitalization of the stuttered word. * Six dots maximum in groups of three, except in long transitions. * Use past tense to describe actions and present tense to state facts, thoughts, or feelings. * Use second person narration as little as possible. * ― for interruption or truncation. * ~ or extra letters for extension. * Spaces follow ellipses ... unless they are followed by punctuation. * Ignore all of the above for vocalizations. === Comments === Lines that do not include an offset will be ignored by ArcTool. You can leave comments in the scripts to ask for clarification. Precede comments with a # to make them stand out. |
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